Sunday, January 09, 2005
essay draft
my teacher asked us to write a short essay about someone describing the person so carefully tht the reader can picture wat the person looked like. i decided to use hilary duff. she's a great example. don't get what i mean? okay then. look at this.
she was rather flabby. or rather beffy. layers of fat bounced up and down as she walked briskly at the sidewalk everyday. i noticed what she wore everyday was horrible. her face was caked with gaudy makeup. with the colors from the rainbow. red. violet. indigo. blue. you name it. she had it. her hair was frizzy. it showed much neglect, due to how dry it seemed to be. probably because of the failed attempts to find the best blonde clor to coat over tht dull natural brown hair color of hers. wearing a pair of tight red pants with a lime green tee; a yellow overcoat doing the finishing touch. if that was what she called it. the clothes looked as if they were picked by a blind sunday school teacher. however. on some days, she would be clad in some dull black attire. totally black. whereares on others, the cherry rainbow-style. 'that girl is weird!' i thought. i didn't understand how the black fingernails could match the blue eye shadow and others. it only made her look very unkempt. but i doubt she noticed it. nor the sniggers behind her back.
heh. now you get what i mean??
&;ANTIHILARY;
posted by Anonymous
10:08 PM
